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Norus_Rebirthed
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Re: My Writing Stuff

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Hello 2024! If Internet forums be dead then create content to read!
I did film my guest set (I've fallen out with so many it was like reading at my own funeral) but it's my legs only!
I did go into a depression that January after the slot. In fact I thought that was it. It's over for my poetry.
And then 22nd of February just like a switch being turned on. Wrote about eight. Here's the last five.
Don't go looking for an overarching theme. Keep limbs close by. Thanks for reading! Create content!

1. Irwin Allen's Quest To View The Submarines
2. Nora, Now What Could?
3. Written Out The Gold Rush
4. Alphabet Court Papers Small Playlet
5. A Cult Without Drawbridges


1. Irwin Allen's Quest To View The Submarines
By Norus_Rebirthed

The compressed rock of that submarine
That can now laugh in the face
Now explained original plan
How forecast an "entire week"
Before glutenous Saturday
Wafted enough from eyes to go "What?..."

And what must the brave crew
Trapped in plastic bag sealed
Can stretch it's franchise into a series?
Commander direct line to a President
Advised, "Tell of salaries and progression!"
Fired one torpedo scientist adjust glasses

Her designs for plans of weapons psychic
"Look how far you've come since the last plan"
"Think of the footfall towards a mountain"
"Picture the corners turned and importantly
Every second passes faster if silently"
Hands on table both knees raised!

Relax, was making sure you weren't
Carrying anything dangerous up sleeve
"Don't think about nakedness"
We've done this! Back of table
There used to be these clubs
In the nineteen eighties onwards

Now dancefloors so empty
Dealing at table seems a private club
With own alcohol on the premises
The borrowed time was a night and dream
To a crumbled rock submarine
Weapon barrel giant now cool for touch

With one hand crewman's fingers
Onto the metal scruff up
With tips regulations insist
Should have been washed off immediate
The compressed rock of a submarine
Fighting its own existence

If forever holds
Then never wrote
If continually used
Then keep seeing the Submarines
Being taken apart
Tinier pieces halved.



2. Nora, Now What Could?
By Norus_Rebirthed

Before the day passed you saw my eyes flash
In the bag that controls and close by everyone knows
How you lie it's all gone smiling
But how I prove most things are lying
Genuine interaction comes from own family
As most friends scared away

Sun is going and idea that small pieces
Make up features of a mask
Or as close to a face
Everything is looking and smiling at you
All you need first is to look for the eyes
And that's a lie but pretty dance

That's conceit or a lifeline
Or is that cheeky for the drowning?
"You rang?" Husband never planned
And far too happy to answer why
Has a face in a bag
That's begging not to be let out

What's complicated about complicit
Is when it's held up to a picture
Not a single idea changed in Movie history
So they repeated it again
Soon everyone tired only misery portrayed
And eyes in the bag of love

Do you promise to link it all up?
Everything written show the exact line
Which reveals the journey from here to your side?
And how it never had cause for name
How in the bag couldn't hear what's saying
Got there just in time for the suffocation

Life preserving skills at time escaped me
Not dead or real but still tormenting
The sky purple and night increasing
And never again these eyes
In the packet and why
The first cure was appetite

And the power of the fists
Cutlery knives
Ate the way down
Because it wasted such time
Spent talking into face
Bare debris rearranged

Just by picking it down
Until both eyes what are saw
The eyes are long gone
But what they promised
Instead replaced with:
"Now what could?".



3. Written Out The Gold Rush
By Norus_Rebirthed

The deadlines invented to extend more time
Which seemed controllable because it's all it had left
Clean garment plan but still the scrub not at hands
That has to change tonight left it late
First impression best if used as launch pad
Can still look in the eye remember the side
Tension of holding it all in
During conversation interrupted
Louder voice unprepared shock
Nothing like that if apologising
More of an impact when shown made amends
Another world to keep separate
And takes up more of your time

What is this latest series of goodbyes?
Never mind the apple,
Who told you about deadlines?

Only believe it's finite
Because instructed by a cabinet
With folders bursting of violence
And hadn't finished Trident
Because the latest update clashes with implant
Watched the balloon and reactions to
Beamed around world to make easier to do
Create an impression but a sideshow
And have nothing to do with
Just another deadline go past sight

The change is continual
And on levels an improvement
Be such fool to miss
Keep it all checked
Business as usual in other words
So to make sure understood correct
If you fail, written out the gold rush
And live to read the book until death.



4. Alphabet Court Papers Small Playlet
By Norus_Rebirthed

Everything that doesn't exist
Can always cure world peace
It's these dreams significant
In the progress of proposals centered

Around beneficial yet still oppressive
And oppression exists as concept sensitive
All forgotten how bright the lights
And the noises toxic odours impound
As the research shows not a single one
Actually managed to bring the ship down

But history gets more fuzzily when
Books taken ordered from shelves
By an in-Chief looking to keep
Back on track an unfinished tale
Being alive but in flight
Burning caused running hard

Cars didn't save them
Cursing soon overtook noise
Carefully always one playing mortality
Captured during an operation to
Clear out surviving evidence catching whom
Commons statement hands appear clean

Detectives go beyond their badge
Down governments and power if plan
Dominates enough and starts the cogs
Designed to rip inside out workings of
Democracy so openly saying "They never wanted us"
Diary of incriminate planted in significant

Encouraged by headlines, a surfer-by
Emails the Court headings to a possible bride
Enough of honesty now it's back to lies
Evil if only money from vulnerable hands
Entertainment complete stranger in a massive court
Especially a case that nearly bought crown!

Foreman, will you let the Jury sit?
Foregone, must hear all evidence first
Fornication, most emotive not in these cases
Forgiveness is a guidance used as weapons into chains
Fulfilment of required laws of doubts and second thoughts
Forget what have just read and go along with loudest

Government, where is your representative?
Gunman, prise open all your contacts
Gullible, those conned used to for your own benefits
Guilty, the least could be said of you
Give me an eternity of bench and I believe
Genuinely will never see more wretched case

Home Office to drop in selected
How management never left fingerprint mess
Hurtling at speeds when it happens to
Help their resources increase again through
Houses strong while others are just
Huts in the mud in the eyes of Lords
House of Commons still has such distance

Inquiry price worth medicines for a town
Insist the blame recognised to a crowd
Instigate hatred make the face
Ingrained associate whenever sound made
Interrupting whatever currently saying
Interrogation deep of culprit probably

Just enough! Stop! Could go on
Jealousy or more complex illness
Jeopardy bought more tea parties
Jiving to beautiful records of art
Justice at its best whatever could do or want
Jokes on whoever never has you or was in charge

Kids, are you getting there's nothing left in your palms?



5. A Cult Without Drawbridges
By Norus_Rebirthed

What is this with smaller
Cut off because unable to contain
Or just chance glimpsed utopian plains
From outside looking at plank of wood
Onto which the drawing plans traced
Before of all that question stopped tracks
Isn't this from above saw as running away?

Behind fences and walls so called humanity
Care establish and still police
Those sneaking into for a better life
Than own guinea pig inhabitants
This isolated cluster of huts
Floor, walls and roofs craft
Hardened from winds and light from

Negates most of the flood
Will cause little harm in an earthquake
Designed support folds to reinforce structure
And if senators risk assess
What if accident one child is crushed?
Offer shares and reply "Why care?...
... that's what your governance usually does!"

So the right to just bye-bye
A cult without drawbridges or towers
With no idea of invite
All into one area to establish
A land which needs never policing
But can establish a health system
A community of trusting held belief system in them

By a single thought of a reachable goal
In the desert? What land?
You cannot take but if you did
It would have to be through arrangements
From all walks they group
Declared this was their land
And for proof began construction

Of their city designed
To needless ever a policeman
But still harmony of a nurse
Cut off from economy
Constitutional anarchy
Every idea looks crackpot
Until it starts their bombing

They had to mention there's molestation
To get attention from people back then
They had to include molestation in the web
Used to explain troops what remained
Were back in service again
The new land taken with all hands
They found the drawing board with plans

Which reached highest office enough
The Despot would-be elected smiled
Let something else do the adjustments
And they could present it
And it wouldn't take a single term
To have that cut off and smaller plan
Used to cattle men who in turn

Praised every step made until learned
Of the blood drained as they slept at night
And somewhere locked in storage
The original drawing board plans
A blood ribbon binding enclosed tight
Airless transparent box in a dark grey safe
Combination over the shoulder thrown eventually.
Norus_Rebirthed
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Re: My Writing Stuff

Post by Norus_Rebirthed »

Thanks for reading in the weeks since last posted here. I've got an open floor this Thursday.
It's green themed so asked to bring something green. Including underwear, the only green thing I have is a dustcloth!
So to get the maximum amount of tension from this, I'll read my entire piece with it held between my knees the whole time. If it falls to the ground... Then all environmental fights are lost!
Here's the last five written . Again! Thought I'd never write anything again. Been a bit of a drought.
But the first was the sole one from April. With the remaining four from May.
Including the two written today in fact!
The first one is about the Israeli crisis. I haven't read it to a crowd because there is a genuine four to the floor dumpa-dumpa-dumpa thing going through it. A lot of the titles come from the last lines.
Apologies also Gil Scott Heron fans for third title. That was written watching Eurovision seeing what would happen when Israel performed.
The 4th I wrote today before a Zoom with Writing On The Wall concerning book bannings.
I'm really trying to avoid that political angle... But it keeps sleeping in!
Enjoy and see what the Summer does!
1. That Murdered Joke
2. Love From The Fighting
3. The Obvious Flashpoint Clearly Never Televised
4. Nothing Dangerous To Say
5. If I Was Geppetto


1. That Murdered Joke
By Norus_Rebirthed

Who's been murdered since?
Oh my gulp
Everyone in the entire universe
If haven't took fingerprint smudge
Going to be taken for addiction instead
Let's see if can bring alive from the dead

Both sides not even of blood
Instead comes argument
Of where do you expect them to go?
Over question of what they've just done?
It's become a tolerance of big a joke
So long that it's dulled lower down
Mind's important list
That had all of a sudden
To take mind from this

Every answer never happens
The planet sobs through an eclipse
So hard to swear but exact point
A daily life asking "What happened?"
Soft hazy massacred "Bombed harpooned"
With failings find exactly "Dropped hurting"

Who's been murdered since
That we know isn't ourselves
Considering the war and personal actions
Using that distance not to joke about it
But this disconnect of course it's bad

Yet at long last
No longer compare to history
In the eras of it's flapping wings
Continuing beat flowing pulse

The entire universe offended
Of making that murdered joke.




2. Love From The Fighting
By Norus_Rebirthed

Are you at number one in the charts?
Or did your mask always worn forget partially
Anything understandable from keeping on page
What's next? Possibly of loss
Establish and have potential crossed
A wooden stake on a building starved
Most never bother looking up what talks
In their heads or with friends
Just went past never looked just sitting down

Are you comfortable and seated
Or has furniture became more contained
Greater intimacy knowing the only way
Of personal habit put to some
Insisting of change
But knew the outline
Steps away from the start
Able to feel with tipped hands
Enough to work out what could
Appease those with hearts
Muddier sounds far could stare

Are you going to let anything in?
You know there wasn't a last time
But instead that easier influence
And kept as target provided
It began tricks by shaking hands
Wasn't it all written down
Easier to get back to complete
Serious broken healed
Now get back onto page
Absorbing stimulus

Are you thinking each line in reverse
Are you nearing the end of the space
Are you drawing on it's underneath
Are you going to write on the side
Are you certain it has exact line
Are the words running over styled
Are there anything that distracts
From keeping numbers on charts
Nothing to do with the doorway
And child sitting down
Are you going to stop writing
Although known read every word
Are you going to save love from the fighting?




3. The Obvious Flashpoint Clearly Never Televised
By Norus_Rebirthed

And the creditors delightful
On their cycle of charging or watch
All generating the coin of their power
The contest a flare gun exact time a signal
To wait until exact provocation

Highest on the mountain
Plastic stacked Christmas game on table
Not even dominos it has an ecosystem
Of kinetic energy displayed as long aligned
Correctly after following instructions

How too expensive tiny pieces
Television advertised and bought for a friend's
Older brother who's shrugging
It knows of destruction
Far greater resentment polite kept quiet

When operated all the sound effects advertised
Only happen in your mind instead laughter
A false interest and in the youngest
The realisation the stacked amusement
So long to set up for disappointment

Creditors instead of greater development
Had everything could to watch for a charge
It was an entire universe and from just that
Creditors able to extract from us a coin
Whatever inspired trusted enough
Everybody forgotten originally saying
Just remembered how creditors generate
From our actions if not charging
To look at being tracked with movements
And one device on a charging cycle

Where did you expect the present day
Take by hand to experience
That constant fear to protect
The previously charged device
Watching Television dots excepting flashpoint

But if the day isn't tomorrow has it ever came?
Until written on diary or calendar mark off
Nothing has been happening just been singing
Here we go, should we kneel in front of screen?
Polite handclap whistling did you notice the enabling

All to offer what could be heard on the radio
Or to an individual alone morning bathroom ritual
A scan of crowd all seem just sitting down
They still insist on dried ice being used
That's it over because I noticed
Everything on their best ever behaviour
The announcer told of silences
From this position could hear noise
And the creditors delighted regardless
Distributing power regardless of uses

Attrition waiting for losing against
The creditor's power distributed
See again that age of time
Rainbows at midnight and voting finds
It still means nothing but coins
Being taken as we charge
Are sleeping or watching
Or screaming it's not enough
A planet waited for the controversial
But saw into their eyes fully perverted

And looked for work to get the coins
To continue the charging or watch power cycle
Don't want to watch the contest
Instead map out such power concept
And the creditors still delightful
Knowing as bonus
They've eaten our life force.




4. Nothing Dangerous To Say
By Norus_Rebirthed

And the words and texts being made forbidden
Drawing outside the lines of their worship
Established proud around the disintegrating
A plan for the our times nobody wins
Coerce the markets there's never proof
Just a factory belt across geographical
Areas of counties industrialised decimated

What sweat drips fall inside shirt
Highest cotton and buttoned yet still incensed
Tracked down the blame to learning them read
Business acumen when good translation
Can be "Game is up! Take every shot!"
Now that reading is noticing

Banned books keeps the planned gold
Shut and frustration made into sold
Through material goods to starve the print
From ever proving to us such was possible
Strongest ammunition in the battle to account
If sentence learned then working out
Past the birthright now complete doubt

It helps voices if they claim don't exist
Keep internalised never mind lines
Fully back into cage
No romantic snob the paper loved
It's the question became too obvious
Even first top of head answering
Could ignite such gasoline minded

A removal of glasses in pondering
What particular words in the sentences
A government singles out for oppression
When always thought of nothing dangerous to say.




5. If I Was Geppetto
By Norus_Rebirthed
And the Geppetto sat forward
Because cat made a noise
Whenever lent to one side
Only witnessed in the bedlight
When only greeting old friend the rain!

Leaning forward all excuses made
All the evidence a shrug of a towel
That art propagate as long whatever is words
But that sleeping child is this creeping defined
Above soldier daggers, fire and bullets

Whatever command status
It's now out to our whole open world
That exists whenever looking out
For sheltered and enough of safety
To rest accommodate what learned from crowd?

"You call that a magic trick?"
"Enough to run profitable in Circus?"
"All you have is to lean backwards enough
For arrested give wrong impression
Never change the few who knew!"

Out the entire puppet business
Learnt how to string the universe
All case of just leaning towards forward when
Raindrops shyly introducing with friend
Asking every question the wind

The perfect snow the careful best man
The marching in boots centurion spoof
Double foot pass alongside
Leather armour parade rehearsal
Whatever described

If Geppetto then it's all looking forward
If Geppetto then what insects are spying?


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